No One: Chapter 2

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By Ebower

Sunlight washed over Katy’s face. She winced and turned over. Not having yet acquired the taste for sand, she got up and brushed herself off. The redundant sound of the waves crashing was more haunting to her today. Her life went on just like the waters reaching out to the shore over and over. It was just as pointless. “Am I glad to be alive?” she asked herself in her thoughts. “Yes, but it would help if I knew something!” Frustrated and hungry, she escaped from the beach and went back amongst the trees to look for food. Finding a blackberry patch, she indulged herself swiftly. Satisfied, but thirsty, she decided to go further into the brush to find water and escape from the oceanic sounds.

After pummeling through the green maze for an hour, she begin to hear something other than the crunch of her feet on the forest floor. It was the sound of moving water! Running, or her version of it, she scurried to the clearing on the left with what little strength she had. She knelt down, practically falling on purpose to scoop up the clear water. Katy’s gaze lifted high after she had a fair share.

“Beautiful,” she said aloud. There was a clear waterfall surrounded by rocky boulders. Resting in the sparkling water were myriads of smooth stones. She picked up an especially flat one and skipped it on the deepest part of the waters. She gasped as she realized the action was somehow significant. She closed her eyes and let the movement trigger her memory.

At some point in the past, she was in a lake; knee deep wearing a green retro style two piece bathing suit. A man came behind her, guiding her hand as he taught her how to skip a rock. The waterfall sounds in the memory and the sounds in the present combined until she opened her eyes.

It wasn’t this place that she recalled, but somewhere similar. She closed her eyes again and focused on the memory of the man’s face. He had a handsome face, but not clean-shaven. Tall, with broad shoulders and a steady chin that jutted out slightly, he was someone that could intimidate. But his eyes, surprisingly green yet hazel at the same time, were gentle and smiling. Katy gasped audibly. Her body had reacted from only the memory of this mystery man. She found herself smiling at the butterflies and warmth coming from her soul. Then confusion washed over her as her eyebrows pulled together. Either to clear her head or to wash the sand off, she threw off her outer clothes and leaped into the deep waters near the waterfall.

After diving deep to amuse herself with the sight of the various rocks, she came up for air and swam to the edge. Katy pulled her lean body up and out, her long golden blonde hair dripping around her. Peering back into the clear water as if it was a mirror, she untangled her hair with her fingers. A girl of around 20 looked back at her with round blue eyes and lips shaped in a bow. She recognized herself, but she didn’t know who she was, where she was from, or why she was here. It was an unsettling feeling.

All of a sudden, the man from her memories appeared in the water beside her reflection and said, “Katy, don’t worry. We’re in this thing together.” In shock, with wide open eyes, she ran all the way back to the beach without thinking about what she was doing. When she arrived, panting with hands on her knees, she realized a little late that it had just been another memory. Or so she thought.


Comments

Shine 9 months ago

Nice story! Haha, I searched my site and this popped up, Im really curious about it this story. :)

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Ebower Hub Author 9 months ago

Thanks, Shine! That's really cool that you found it on your web site. What site did you find it on? I would be thrilled if you would read all the chapters. I hope to write more soon. Thanks for reading and commenting!

8 months ago

Voted up.

Another great photo! (Looks vaguely like a stream in the Appalachians, or somewhere similar.)

Blessings.

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Ebower Hub Author 8 months ago

Thanks for voting! Thank you. :) I like to include interesting and beautiful photos in my hubs. It does sort of look like that. Although, I've only seen part of the Applachians in person.

8 months ago

You choose some great pictures, anyway.

Blessings.

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Ebower Hub Author 8 months ago

Well, thank you. :)

8 months ago

YW. Often it's the juxtaposition of thought-provoking wording with a thematically relevant picture that can make for a particularly striking combination, anyway, for a writer. Blessings.

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Ebower Hub Author 8 months ago

That's my goal!

8 months ago

With some ppl the visual can even become more important than the written, of course, which I'm sure isn't your goal. I was thinking for example of a writer getting Picasso to illustrate his or her writings; the visual would end up being more important than the writings.

In a sense, CNN providing visuals can almost distort analysis, when the visual becomes more important, supposedly than the words.

(But I'm digressing a bit.)

Blessings.

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Ebower Hub Author 8 months ago

It's ok to digress; it just means our comment conversation is going in a different direction. :) You make a good point. Yes, I would hope my included pictures would complement my writing and not overshadow them.

8 months ago

Yes, complement is a good word, rather than 'overwhelm'. Blessings.

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Ebower Hub Author 8 months ago

Exactly!

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htodd 7 months ago

Thanks great hub.

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Ebower Hub Author 7 months ago

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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lyns 7 months ago

OMG,, this is awesome, I couldn't read it all because my eyes are so dry from reading all day and night but this story is so captivating, is this a short novel your are publishing excellent, I graded accordingly, thanks for sharing have a lovely evening.

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Ebower Hub Author 7 months ago

Thanks, lyns! I guess it's a form of a novella. I hope to put it on Amazon.com once I have enough money. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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Deborah Brooks 3 months ago

Wow love chapter 2...can't wait to read chapter 3...

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Ebower Hub Author 3 months ago

Deborah Brooks: Thanks! I tried to create chapters that were filled with suspense and intrigue.

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